A Quiet woman
After my recent small success (runner up out of 5000
entrants in Sage life story comp) I was touched to receive warm congratulations
from a number of old members of a couple of writing groups – now defunct – I
used to belong to.
Then she had a fallow
period when she was aware her poetry didn’t come up to Keats or Tennyson and writing poetry was considered very
eccentric. You didn’t tell anyone you
wrote poetry.
Dipping into Bluebells, Rainbows and Sheep over the
last week I have found this to be true.
In Doris ’s words it is accessible. It is beautifully illustrated with Doris ’s old photos underlying the verse as if one is
looking through the mist of the years
I asked Doris which was her
favourite poem and she said that was like asking a mother which was her favourite
child. .
Heartbreak, joy, sadness and humour are present in this
book. What more is there?
Return to Exmoor
by Doris Sloley
Pick me a bluebell,
next time you go there.
Walk through the wood
and on over the stream,
Up the green slope
with grasshoppers singing,
Just where I,
oftentimes go in my dreams.
I can go back,
myself, if I want but
If I return to the
place that I knew,
All of my memories
will crowd in and then
I shall be sad- but
it’s different for you.
You haven’t known the
fun of haymaking,
Watched tadpoles
wriggle and dart in the pond,
Helped to ‘head out’
a corn rick by moon light,
Rode through the
fields to the moorland beyond,
Run to a meadow where
lambs were playing,
Skipping and racing
in boundless delight,
Climbed up the hill
where we would go sledging
In winter when all
was coated in white.
Is there a tree,
still, in the old orchard?
Can you find lanes
where wild strawberries grow?
Are there
blackberries, now in the cow field?
Do you hear calls of
a distant curlew?
I want to keep all
these memories of mine
Locked up in my
heart, unaltered by time.
Doris now lives in the pretty village of Monksilver
– so near and yet so far. On a lighter
note;
Compliment – or Not
It was all a long,
long time ago
And I’ve no regrets,
not now.
But did you have to
give my name to
Your pedigree
Friesian cow?
This is a book I shall be keeping close to hand. Available from Amazon £9.99
20 comments:
I really like her and her poetry.
Pearl
lovely! this is perfect:
I can go back, myself, if I want but
If I return to the place that I knew,
All of my memories will crowd in and then
I shall be sad- but it’s different for you.
poetry should be part of our daily life because of words like
this! thank you, sugar! xoxoxox
Lovely !
I agree with Savannah that was my favorite part, so much thought.
"Compliment -or Not" is a hoot !
cheers, parsnip
That is a lovely poem and I can picture it in my mind - using some of your photos for fodder.
Pearl: that's good:)
Savannah: so glad you appreciate it.xoxox
Parsnip: there is quite a bit of humour in the book.
Judy: what a lovely idea.
"there is no intellectual barrier shutting out the reader."
What a great line.
Chef: I later realised that the person who wrote it - Jenny Glandfield_ had taken one of the last writing classes I went to. Doris was lucky to have her help. I sometimes think I shoulld have been braver about asking other writers to read my book whilst it was in progress.
Really lovely and indeed, so accessible....I'm going to go over to Amazon and get me a copy...!
Thanks so much, Pat....!
Pat, it's no about bravery hen, it's about confidence. You have plenty of that.
Ahh, love the Friesian cow poem! I was uncertain about the other poem, partly because I've never been convinced that anybody actually hears the call of the curlew except in poetry, but then I realised that Doris probably manages to get out a lot more than I do.
Beautiful, the first poem that is. Although the second one is funny.
I love poets and poetry and made a considerable sum writing custom, descriptive poetry for all occasions on order in the late 80's and early 90's. Two blog poets thrill me but one has ceased blogging and I miss her. Did you ever read Talon? Another has emerged who I enjoy a great deal. Ashok is on my sidebar.
Your friend has obviously lived in a time gone by that wrapped her in the beauty of nature. You shared a treasure today.
Poets are gentle souls who shouldn't subject themselves to life in an office if it can be helped. Accessible poetry works best for me. I don't deal in metaphor very well. Isn't having a signed copy the best?
It looks like an entertaining read. I like the wistful and somehow joyous nature of the first one and the giggle that should accompany the second one.
Poetry seems to have a resurgence of interest nowadays. I've visited a few recent readings where it's very much alive and well.
Naomi: I'm sure you'll love it.]
Chef: we'll see if you are right - by next week. DV
Gadjo: trust me - with all those years on the farm on Exmoor Doris will have heard everything.
LOM: I wish I could have quoted more but I think Doris preferred that I left it to the two examples. Of course I asked her permission.
Granny Annie: good for you!
I shall look up Ashok.
Thank you for your kind words. I look forward to reporting them to Doris.
UB: at one time Doris and - what she calls the three P's -Paul, Penne and Pat were the only ones left of a writing circle. We all encouraged each other but in my copy she actually thanks me. So sweet.
Rashbre: the first one made me a bit misty eyed and I found 'Breakdown ' very moving.
After a long hiatus, I'm back to commenting, at leas occasionally.
Congrats on your success, dear. Well deserved.
I shall now go to catch up.
Cheers.
Randalol: that's the second lovely, exciting thing that has happened today. SOOO pleased.
So excited I can't spell Randall:)
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